Since the beginning of the year, Geckos, I have asked for descriptive words when writing about our fieldtrips, otherwise each one sounds like the other with no specific information. I have banned "like" "love" "it was fun" "it was awesome" unless you used a qualifying statement to back it up...basically "why?!!" The same applies to "good" "bad" and "said" "go"...please amaze me with your writing
Since the beginning of the year, Geckos, I have asked for descriptive words when writing about our fieldtrips, otherwise each one sounds like the other with no specific information. I have banned "like" "love" "it was fun" "it was awesome" unless you used a qualifying statement to back it up...basically "why?!!" The same applies to "good" "bad" and "said" "go"...please amaze me with your writing
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